The proposed amendments are so PC that they have bad grammar, bad sentence structure, and all sense of poetry has been removed. The committee has removed every pronoun referring to God. Many of the word substitutions change the meaning and intent of the statements but most will neither recognize nor care. As a recent convert to the CRC, there are two changes in theology of which I approve but most old timers might not. First, there is an implication that process theology might be acceptable. More important, isn't the federal headship of Adam a CRC doctrine? In every reference to our fall into sin, "Adam" has been replaced by "Adam and Eve." The human race was cursed because Adam and Eve sinned. If this is a back door to officially give females equal access to every office of the Church, fine with me ... you ladies can't do much worse than we males have.